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dhia's avatar

you are definitely correct with how the song impacted the poem, I was in my feels x

anya's avatar

thank you xx

SeaGlass Letters's avatar

"I've never seen your face / But I remember its reflection"..wow! its like tender and mournful in the way only nature can be. and the song? it deepened the poem's voice truly. beautiful work!

anya's avatar

thank you so much!

BuyNowSellLater's avatar

This is breathtaking. A quiet ache flows through every line—like the stream itself is both witness and participant in a love left waiting.

anya's avatar

you’re so kind x thank you Allen x

Jude Manickam's avatar

This is something I was toying with - mixing music with words. But you have created a beautiful oasis. I will just enjoy it! ❤️😊

anya's avatar

thank you so much x i’m glad you do

Cary's avatar

First, thanks for recommending to listen to the song while reading it. That was pretty perfect, actually. Second, this definitely resonated with me, and I think would with my wife as well. We've gotten into a rut where we've kind of drifted apart. We started seeing a marriage counselor, which is definitely helping. But yeah, I think we both feel a little bit like, you know, the other ones not willing to come and sit by our side very much.

You gotta tend that garden.

anya's avatar

you're so kind, thank you. and also thank you for sharing x you are right

Ammaarah Karlie's avatar

i think i might have fallen in love with your words... omg, truly beautiful.

anya's avatar

you’re so so so generous with your words. thank you so much x

Samyak's avatar

Compels me to go and actually see a river flowing while doing nothing else. Thanks for sharing!

This was playing in the background as I read this hehe: https://open.spotify.com/track/5f3fZaZnUSnyNj1ZEkze32?si=8b654cf94f164df7

anya's avatar

oh my god i’ve been trying to find this song for so long!! thank you so so much for sharing x and thank you for your generous words xx

florence's avatar

absolutely beautiful! written so magically , sending love. x

anya's avatar

thank you so much xx

Yols's avatar

The song was just🤌🏼 chef kiss

anya's avatar

right??? it’s so full of hope

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anya's avatar

thank you so much xx

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Apr 24, 2025
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